demoninabottle's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Batman Hates Robin]

Pretty Good

Would you guys stop flaming this guy for being on the front page. He earned it. While this isn't the best flash on newgrounds, it was good for a few laughs. You might want to speed up the grain of salt, but I saw some serious potential in this animation.

vlaktemaat responds:

thnx for the tip man

[Shattered Heaven Op. 1]

Meh

Not the best

AdamTilford responds:

Thanks for such an indepth amazing critique. I'm in awe.

[13 Halloween Tips]

Pretty good

They were much better in a compilation, but doesn't that make thirteen of your past submissions completely obselete (or double posts?) Oh well, I'm not gonna call you on being greedy because you were just answering to the requests of fans. Good job 4/5

remyzero responds:

hahahah, my initial idea was to release them as one, but as Halloween crept closer, and closer, I was under much stress to finish them all. So I decided to release them one by one since on other sites, sometimes they require an approval first, so all 13 might have not been seen on the main day. It also helped figure out which flashes were the heavy hitters. Tip 4 and Tip 5, I'd say got the most views and attention accross a couple of sites. By releasing them all together in the end it also allowed for people that wanted to see them all at once without having to open new windows and what not, I had also had planned for a little extra to the all 13 together flash, but I ran out of time. Thanks!

[Random FPF Sickness 2]

Eh, I'm gonna help you as much as I can!!

Bro, this is not a hate review, this is a flash artist helping another artist. Okay, so the first thing is, while you understand how to work an fbf, you aren't applying it to make flashes that will achieve a high score, or, in some cases, make it thru judgement. These line fbf's have been so overdone that if you want yours to stand out, it has to be longer, more complex, and do something. But really, line fbf's are more of a warm up, or practice for true fbf animation. People get tired of watching these so lately they are becoming less and less likely to pass thru the portal. Try appling your fbf skills to a true flash with lots of meat in it, like a fight scene or comedic death or whatever floats your boat.
Good Luck

Fiskmannen responds:

Okay.

[This Is Spa..Erm. Madness]

Lol

this is almost montypythonish...sans the blood

DuDuL responds:

LLOOLMAOI

[Madness Prime]

Not the best

While a pretty good flash on its own, there's one thing I kept thinking: This is nothing like madness. But I think you've been told that enough so let me tell you how to make it MORE like madness. First, the music shouldn't be hardcore, but more goofy, which adds humor to the killing, rather than just making it a show of blood. Second, on the flip-side, put more blood into it!!! Madness is famous for its extreme decapitational, orrifice-creating antics!! Third, fewer pauses between killings. The cool part of madness is the quick transitions to the next kill. Fourth, don't make the sound effects so damn powerful. Madness is good-hearted violence, so no more bassy gore-pounding sound fx.
Otherwise, keep it up...I see potential in you!!

Erreip199 responds:

ill try looking for good music in the audio portal, the blood problem will be fixed in the next one, less pauses check, and the sfx... its hard to find good ones, help? =P anyways thx for the review

[Skate in style 3]

Really a good job.

It was much better than most of those stupid stick flashes, as well as much more original for you didn't have him die in stupid ways. Plus, the sounds were great and choreographed excellently. If you could just switch the stick for a realistic looking person, I believe this would be much better, and that you have the talent to do that.

ZeroJ responds:

Yeah thats when i animate bails then theyl get hurt. But muc alike in other skateflashes there is way too many blood involved that what it makes unoriginal : D

[Stampers Sexual Encounter]

hmm

No doubt it was funny, and the graphics were great. If only it was longer

Sir-CannabisClock responds:

:(

[Sunday Comics & Toons 003]

I liked it

I like the fact that you weren't lazy and bothered to make a lot of animations to make this flash compilation a success. Good job

RSQViper responds:

I aim to get at elast 5 each week. So far, so good. =)

Thanks for the review!

[Pico's Berserker]

I'll take a stab at constructive critisism.

The flash seemed more than an animation more than an ad for Pico day. More meat was a necessity, plus the guns were firing before the were shot. A greater attempt should have been made to choreograph the gun_mc and the shots to be at the same time.

Now this flash isn't necessarily bad, I just hoped I helped with my comments in future flash projects from you.

Lost-Chances responds:

Thank you very much and your constructive critisism will be kept in mind next time either I or BlueFlameSkulls attempt a flash.