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Would you guys stop flaming this guy for being on the front page. He earned it. While this isn't the best flash on newgrounds, it was good for a few laughs. You might want to speed up the grain of salt, but I saw some serious potential in this animation.
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thnx for the tip man
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Not the best
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Thanks for such an indepth amazing critique. I'm in awe.
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Much better with the music behind it. How much they end up paying you for it?
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Thanks for the review, not as much as I wanted... I suppose it is ok though.
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They were much better in a compilation, but doesn't that make thirteen of your past submissions completely obselete (or double posts?) Oh well, I'm not gonna call you on being greedy because you were just answering to the requests of fans. Good job 4/5
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hahahah, my initial idea was to release them as one, but as Halloween crept closer, and closer, I was under much stress to finish them all. So I decided to release them one by one since on other sites, sometimes they require an approval first, so all 13 might have not been seen on the main day. It also helped figure out which flashes were the heavy hitters. Tip 4 and Tip 5, I'd say got the most views and attention accross a couple of sites. By releasing them all together in the end it also allowed for people that wanted to see them all at once without having to open new windows and what not, I had also had planned for a little extra to the all 13 together flash, but I ran out of time. Thanks!
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"Eh, I'm gonna help you as much as I can!!"
Bro, this is not a hate review, this is a flash artist helping another artist. Okay, so the first thing is, while you understand how to work an fbf, you aren't applying it to make flashes that will achieve a high score, or, in some cases, make it thru judgement. These line fbf's have been so overdone that if you want yours to stand out, it has to be longer, more complex, and do something. But really, line fbf's are more of a warm up, or practice for true fbf animation. People get tired of watching these so lately they are becoming less and less likely to pass thru the portal. Try appling your fbf skills to a true flash with lots of meat in it, like a fight scene or comedic death or whatever floats your boat.
Good Luck
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Okay.
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Not nearly enough stuff to capure the gore of MADNESS. Need to be able to rotate shit 2
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Sorry, heh...I tried my best.
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this is almost montypythonish...sans the blood
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LLOOLMAOI
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While a pretty good flash on its own, there's one thing I kept thinking: This is nothing like madness. But I think you've been told that enough so let me tell you how to make it MORE like madness. First, the music shouldn't be hardcore, but more goofy, which adds humor to the killing, rather than just making it a show of blood. Second, on the flip-side, put more blood into it!!! Madness is famous for its extreme decapitational, orrifice-creating antics!! Third, fewer pauses between killings. The cool part of madness is the quick transitions to the next kill. Fourth, don't make the sound effects so damn powerful. Madness is good-hearted violence, so no more bassy gore-pounding sound fx.
Otherwise, keep it up...I see potential in you!!
Author's Response:
ill try looking for good music in the audio portal, the blood problem will be fixed in the next one, less pauses check, and the sfx... its hard to find good ones, help? =P anyways thx for the review
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I loved that movie.. so any flash that is related to it kicks ass. Nice art 2
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Thanks haha
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It may have been good. I don't mind racist jokes or whatever for i believe that someone who makes a racist statement as a "joke" doesn't actually believe what he says so its all in good fun. But I think you honestly need a new mike, because I couldn't hear a word you said buddy. Oh, and more animation because audio with that little animation should be saved for the audio portal.
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Spill the blood of the white people
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